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#21 Maun

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Posted 15 August 2006 - 08:44 PM

This is real good stuff. I like Haiku much.

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#22 chamatkaribaba

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Posted 16 August 2006 - 05:44 AM

wow wonderful!!!!!!!How I missed earlier.........
Let's give a try...My some Haikus here. One clarification, I absolutely know nothing in this field but what is wrong to give a try haina ra?
Please correct me where I go wrong......
1
Desi Raksi
Bideshi botal
Meri Premika ra ma. smile.gif

2
Hiuda ko jado
Barkha ko pani
Mausam anusar badlanchha

3
Aaja barta hotel ma
Bholi barta Resort ma
Nepal ko Rajniti

4
Timi America ma
Ma India ma
Napatyaye WNSO lai sodha

I do not want to break your heart more than this.

Theft!
Theft!
And Theft!
No one is safe anywhere,
Thieves are rampant everywhere
Light is stolen,
Dreams are stolen,
Faith is stolen,
Mud is stolen,
Love is stolen,
Life and death are stolen
Alas! What can you expect from others,
When God himself is a thief?
In "Indra Jatra" by Dinesh Adhikary, Sajha Prakashan, 2051 B.S

#23 Maun

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Posted 18 August 2006 - 10:31 AM


* Spring Scene

On the temple bell
has settled and fast asleep
a butterfly

Wake up! Wake up! It's I,
who want your companion,
Sleeping butterfly


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#24 chamatkaribaba

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Posted 18 August 2006 - 10:51 AM

good good very good..........when i see somebody writing something, i just get inspiration......

The Dark Night
the silence in the air
all in my lovely dreams
Theft!
Theft!
And Theft!
No one is safe anywhere,
Thieves are rampant everywhere
Light is stolen,
Dreams are stolen,
Faith is stolen,
Mud is stolen,
Love is stolen,
Life and death are stolen
Alas! What can you expect from others,
When God himself is a thief?
In "Indra Jatra" by Dinesh Adhikary, Sajha Prakashan, 2051 B.S

#25 Maun

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Posted 24 August 2006 - 11:51 PM

* The firefly hunt

The firefly hunt
The lost child cries
and as he cries, he clutches
at the fireflies.


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#26 prachi

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Posted 10 June 2009 - 02:06 PM


त्रासको छाँया
वेदनाको वर्षा
र मधुर शान्ती।

उठ हे युवा
रोक्नु पर्‍यो अब
अन्यौलको आँधी।

अब जन्मिनु पर्‍यो
घर घर मा
यस युग का बुद्ध।



This world is so wide that even if you flitted around and around it, you would never reach the end of it.



#27 ram dotyal

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Posted 15 June 2009 - 06:04 AM


एउटा छोरा मन्त्री
अर्को विपक्षी नेता
नेपाल आमाको रोग ।।

राम युग गयो
बुद्ध भासिए
क्रिरामबुद्ध पलाए।।



"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#28 dipeshmnm

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Posted 22 June 2009 - 07:01 AM

Welcome back rachi and Ram Dotyal !

Asarai maina
na jhari badal
pahela dhanka beeu.

#29 Mohan Bikram Thapa

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Posted 30 September 2009 - 01:29 PM

दिपेस सर
दसैं आयो आयो खै !
थाहा भएन
Naya Bichar from Naya Patrika
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#30 vin22

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Posted 03 October 2009 - 12:38 PM

Haiku bhaneko k rahicha bhanne kura mann manai lagya thiyo, hajurko yo post dhilai bhaye pani padera thaha pauda sarai khusi layo, yestai ramro ramro jankari haru didai garnu hola.
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