kamal 0 Report post Posted December 16, 2002 yo birano basti ma, bato bhetiyena hindda hidda jindagi ko, aasha dekhiyena bhare ho ki bholi ho ki, bhanna ma sakdina baadal mathi ghumne chandra, chuna ma sakdina | bata haru chhota bhaye, chalna sakdina kshitiz pari pugchhan aankha, rokna sakdina baisa ma tyo yaad bhayena, janu parne raichha karma gare aphailaae, bhujhna dhila bhayechha || khali haat matra mera, chhaina dinu kehi chhoto rahechha jindagani, sundar banaaunu herda herdai jivan bhayo, danda pari ko ghaam gara kehi deu kehi, yo duniyaa laae, sandesh timilaae Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BalayarCB 0 Report post Posted December 18, 2002 Love this one yaar.... OH, Kamal Jee Tapai Ta Ramro Lekhnu Hudo Rahechha. Please, do continue Laa.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
surajmg 0 Report post Posted December 19, 2002 wow really nice poem..... thank you.. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ram dotyal 0 Report post Posted December 20, 2002 Kamal Jee ! It was really very nice Poem. Thank you very much for posting your Poem here. Every words are really touchable, Love your Poem. Please ! keep posting. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites