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#1 ishwor(ishan)



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Posted 26 February 2009 - 08:48 AM

A boy was madly in love with a girl
Though he didn't wanna make a call
The girl liked another boy
She seemed to be enjoying her own joy

Days passed by and nights went blank
when the boy proposed she thought it was a prank
The boy got mad day by day
We're just friends was all she could say.

The day came when things fell apart.
Who knew love could bring such a hazard.
One day the boy died with all his despair.
Not a drop of tear nor did she care

#2 newapasa


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Posted 20 March 2009 - 10:44 AM

I like the rhythm. Keep it up.
Thought is free.

#3 narayan_th



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Posted 28 April 2009 - 12:21 PM

hum... nice one

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