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#11 manoj

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Posted 15 July 2004 - 12:51 PM

jeewana ko rangamanch maa
arko euta din bityo
thuprai aru naatak jasto
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#12 Prajapati Ojha

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Posted 15 July 2004 - 01:56 PM


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#13 Naaz

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Posted 15 July 2004 - 02:18 PM


sansaar sanga haina ma yahaa ko chalan sanga daraauchhu
maayaa sanga haina ma dhoka-baazi sanga daraauchhu
maayaa ta yasai pani hunchha nai
maayaa ko sangaalo pachhi maayaaluko dhokaa sanga daraauchhu,

maayaa garnu kunai thulo kuraa hoina
maayaa ta nibhaaun kasaile yahaa heru
maayaamaa khayekaa kasam banchaa haru
imandaarile nibhaaun kasaile yahaa heru,

naulo anjaan pathamaa ta ma hide
ho-os chahe je sukai parinaam
kasam chha shri parameshwor ko
je sukai hos tyo hos, pachhi farkinu naparos feri tyahi dhaam,

jeevanako safaramaa paaielaan kayau man paraauneharu
jindagi bhar je chaahe yadi mile tyo kahin
hunna hola gunasho shayad ma baat
marnu banchnu ta chha bas yahin nai,

sansaar sanga haina ma yahaa ko chalan sanga daraauchhu
maayaa sanga haina ma dhoka-baazi sanga daraauchhu
maayaa ta yasai pani hunchha nai
maayaa ko sangaalo pachhi maayaaluko dhokaa sanga daraauchhu!!

Even though we know how far apart we are, it helps to think we might be wishing on the same bright star. And the night wind start to sing a lonesome lullaby, it helps to think we're sleeping underneath the same big sky.

#14 sujita

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Posted 16 July 2004 - 11:06 AM


That's a great one Naaz ji. Your writings seems simple but if we go to deeply in your words, we readers have to say "Yes, that's true".

Thank you Naaz ji.
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#15 surendras

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 04:45 AM

QUOTE (Prajapati Ojha @ Jul 15 2004, 01:56 PM)
Ati sundar. tongue.gif

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Arko pani hai ta.

Eklai yasai basidida bahyo smritiko jhokaa!
chhaadijaane baigunilai samjhi man mera rokaa!
latyaer maya mero uni bilaee gaeen bhaee paaniko phokaa!
shwaas mero liee gaeen, nichorina haanso othakaa!!

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#16 surendras

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 04:48 AM

QUOTE (manoj @ Jul 15 2004, 12:51 PM)
jeewana ko rangamanch maa
arko euta din bityo
thuprai aru naatak jasto
arko euta prit bityo wink.gif

Thankx manoj jee
bastawamai jeevan euta rangmanchh nai ho! hami ta babura.........aaphno role matra nibhai rahekaachhou.
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#17 sanjeev_ghimire

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Posted 17 July 2004 - 01:14 PM

Namaskar sabai jana lai, Ma pani kehele kai phatta phutta leakchhu, tara tesli ke bhanchhan malai tha chhaina,
gazal ho ki, kabita
muktak ho ki chutkila
prastut chha mero sano rachana

Madhur Mirdu muskan le ousko
malai sithil banaegayo,
khyal thatta garda gardai,
yeo hirdaya ko sero phero prem ko paluwa palayo,
sathi prem ko paluwa palayoooooo.



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#18 surendras

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Posted 22 July 2004 - 01:09 PM

Jeendagi lai sukha samjhe
tara hudorahechha du:kha pani!

premlai milan samjhe
tara hudorahechha bochod pani!

bhagawan sang prathana garnus
haarako hoina jeetako!

pritikshaa garnus tapaaile
bichodako hoina milanako!!

Jadou!

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#19 narayan_thapa007

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Posted 22 July 2004 - 04:10 PM

wow surendra ji good going keet it up
verry nice poem ....
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#20 Preeti Shrestha

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Posted 24 July 2004 - 10:03 AM

QUOTE (Naaz @ Jul 15 2004, 02:18 PM)
sansaar sanga haina ma yahaa ko chalan sanga daraauchhu
maayaa sanga haina ma dhoka-baazi sanga daraauchhu
maayaa ta yasai pani hunchha nai
maayaa ko sangaalo pachhi maayaaluko dhokaa sanga daraauchhu,

maayaa garnu kunai thulo kuraa hoina
maayaa ta nibhaaun kasaile yahaa heru
maayaamaa khayekaa kasam banchaa haru
imandaarile nibhaaun kasaile yahaa heru,

naulo anjaan pathamaa ta ma hide
ho-os chahe je sukai parinaam
kasam chha shri parameshwor ko
je sukai hos tyo hos, pachhi farkinu naparos feri tyahi dhaam,

jeevanako safaramaa paaielaan kayau man paraauneharu
jindagi bhar je chaahe yadi mile tyo kahin
hunna hola gunasho shayad ma baat
marnu banchnu ta chha bas yahin nai,

sansaar sanga haina ma yahaa ko chalan sanga daraauchhu
maayaa sanga haina ma dhoka-baazi sanga daraauchhu
maayaa ta yasai pani hunchha nai
maayaa ko sangaalo pachhi maayaaluko dhokaa sanga daraauchhu!!

That's great, it beat my heart. Keep posting Naaz ji.
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