Jamee 0 Report post Posted January 21, 2005 Priya...! Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi Na latthidai band bhayo Tyo Nasha hau timi Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko Mero man ko dor hau timi Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu Sagar samma nai pugyeu Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu Maile bujhe priya Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi. Jahan heru jahan jau Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi Yadi nidauchhu ta Sapanima bhetinchhau timi Mero har khushi har dukkha Har palharuma timi Har pal sangai rahera pani Priya, Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi? Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai Harayeka kiran hau timi Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare Harayeka chhaya hau timi Tyo raat feri audaichha Tyo joon pani lagnechha Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon Joon jhai lagnechha Priya, Auchhauki ki timi? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
narayan_thapa007 0 Report post Posted January 21, 2005 mero laagi yo asambhav chha priya.... ki ma timro man ko dhukdhuki hunsakchhu bhani.... tara ma timi sanga dherai nai maya garchhu priya...... tara sabai laai kin bhandai hiDu...... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KalluG 0 Report post Posted January 22, 2005 Priya...! Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi Na latthidai band bhayo Tyo Nasha hau timi Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko Mero man ko dor hau timi Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu Sagar samma nai pugyeu Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu Maile bujhe priya Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi. Jahan heru jahan jau Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi Yadi nidauchhu ta Sapanima bhetinchhau timi Mero har khushi har dukkha Har palharuma timi Har pal sangai rahera pani Priya, Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi? Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai Harayeka kiran hau timi Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare Harayeka chhaya hau timi Tyo raat feri audaichha Tyo joon pani lagnechha Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon Joon jhai lagnechha Priya, Auchhauki ki timi? 65478[/snapback] What a wonderful piece this is. Beglai khalko ani dherai man chhune kavita aaj pahilo patak padhna paye chautarima. Thank you very much Jamee ji and warm welcome to come to chautari. And hoping to read more touching poems from you. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ram dotyal 0 Report post Posted January 23, 2005 Priya...! Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi Na latthidai band bhayo Tyo Nasha hau timi Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko Mero man ko dor hau timi Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu Sagar samma nai pugyeu Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu Maile bujhe priya Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi. Jahan heru jahan jau Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi Yadi nidauchhu ta Sapanima bhetinchhau timi Mero har khushi har dukkha Har palharuma timi Har pal sangai rahera pani Priya, Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi? Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai Harayeka kiran hau timi Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare Harayeka chhaya hau timi Tyo raat feri audaichha Tyo joon pani lagnechha Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon Joon jhai lagnechha Priya, Auchhauki ki timi? 65478[/snapback] Priyasee, hataar kina ? Aajai ta aaiichheu hataar kina? Gara kuraa saath sangai Kuraa prem kahaaneemaa Sangai milera sunna Kehee samaya laagchha nai, Bichaleet chhau yati kina Bachapanako muTu pheree joDna? Man sanga man milna Sur - taal milaauna Purai umer panee bitna sakchha, Jeevan yo khel hoina Ki haansee khelee KshaN bharmai puraa hos Kehee tarangaharu lyaaunamaa Jyaan panee jaana sakchha, Aaj aaechheu, yahaa saath chheu Ma chaahanchhu ki tyo Aba ke chaahiyo jindageemaa Je chha sabai bhandaa thulo chha Jun haamro aaj pheree milan bhayo SamarpaN ko samaya lyaaunalaaee Shwaashaharu panee banda huna sakchhan, Kasaiko najik hunu bhannu nai Ki ta sansaar jaaos ki ta jeeu jyaan Umerako garnu ke Yahee din harauna panee saktachha !! Maile saachera raakheko chhu bachapanakaa har palaharulaaee jun haamro ek amit smritee ho. Aaj yo ghaDeemaa aaee yahaa bheT bhayo ra dherai nai khushee laagyo. A very warm welcome to Chautari. I hope to talk many more in the coming moments. Where are you now, by the way? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainka_Shivani 0 Report post Posted January 23, 2005 This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KalluG 0 Report post Posted January 24, 2005 Priya...! Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi Na latthidai band bhayo Tyo Nasha hau timi Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko Mero man ko dor hau timi Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu Sagar samma nai pugyeu Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu Maile bujhe priya Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi. Jahan heru jahan jau Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi Yadi nidauchhu ta Sapanima bhetinchhau timi Mero har khushi har dukkha Har palharuma timi Har pal sangai rahera pani Priya, Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi? Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai Harayeka kiran hau timi Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare Harayeka chhaya hau timi Tyo raat feri audaichha Tyo joon pani lagnechha Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon Joon jhai lagnechha Priya, Auchhauki ki timi? 65478[/snapback] Priya...! Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi Na latthidai band bhayo Tyo Nasha hau timi Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko Mero man ko dor hau timi Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu Sagar samma nai pugyeu Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu Maile bujhe priya Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi. Jahan heru jahan jau Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi Yadi nidauchhu ta Sapanima bhetinchhau timi Mero har khushi har dukkha Har palharuma timi Har pal sangai rahera pani Priya, Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi? Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai Harayeka kiran hau timi Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare Harayeka chhaya hau timi Tyo raat feri audaichha Tyo joon pani lagnechha Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon Joon jhai lagnechha Priya, Auchhauki ki timi? 65478[/snapback] Priyasee, hataar kina ? Aajai ta aaiichheu hataar kina? Gara kuraa saath sangai Kuraa prem kahaaneemaa Sangai milera sunna Kehee samaya laagchha nai, Bichaleet chhau yati kina Bachapanako muTu pheree joDna? Man sanga man milna Sur - taal milaauna Purai umer panee bitna sakchha, Jeevan yo khel hoina Ki haansee khelee KshaN bharmai puraa hos Kehee tarangaharu lyaaunamaa Jyaan panee jaana sakchha, Aaj aaechheu, yahaa saath chheu Ma chaahanchhu ki tyo Aba ke chaahiyo jindageemaa Je chha sabai bhandaa thulo chha Jun haamro aaj pheree milan bhayo SamarpaN ko samaya lyaaunalaaee Shwaashaharu panee banda huna sakchhan, Kasaiko najik hunu bhannu nai Ki ta sansaar jaaos ki ta jeeu jyaan Umerako garnu ke Yahee din harauna panee saktachha !! Maile saachera raakheko chhu bachapanakaa har palaharulaaee jun haamro ek amit smritee ho. Aaj yo ghaDeemaa aaee yahaa bheT bhayo ra dherai nai khushee laagyo. A very warm welcome to Chautari. I hope to talk many more in the coming moments. Where are you now, by the way? 65550[/snapback] Dada, Is this your real story or just a poetry version. Seems to me, you both were very closed friends or.... from childhood. She is also from our heaven, I think. Below is here details (I found on her ID): Dipika Surname: Shah High School: Birendra Vidhyapith Village/Town: Tikapur District: Kailali Current University/College: Citizen Welfare Education Society's (SCOE) Subject: Culture Town/City: Budhwar Wada, Malegaon Place of Birth: No Information Web site: No Information Gender: Female But where is this Budhwar Wada, Malegaon? This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee. 65561[/snapback] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainka_Shivani 0 Report post Posted January 25, 2005 Dada, Is this your real story or just a poetry version. Seems to me, you both were very closed friends or.... from childhood. She is also from our heaven, I think. But where is this Budhwar Wada, Malegaon? On behalf of your brother, It's only poetry version and in fact she is also very good writer. Yes, they were very good friends from childhood. She is younger sister of our big family sister, not other. Before, she were studying in Mihipur of MP. Now she is studying in Malegaon. Malegaon is in Maharasthra and it takes 7 hrs to reach to Malegaon from Mumbai. Herdai jau aba Jeeja ra Saali ko poetry version kaha samma pugchha. This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee. 65561[/snapback] 65629[/snapback] Don't laugh on me, ok? huh?? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jamee 0 Report post Posted January 25, 2005 Priya.... Euta sundar sapana Maile feri herna suru gare Jab afnai manma haat rakhi Afailai sodhe tab Manle dikkat na mani samjhayo, "Jamee, Nadeeka duii kinarara Dharti ani aakash Dhan ani hrin Din ani raat Andhyaro ani ujyalo Ek aapasma mildainan Tara aaj Timra nayanle kehi dhun gaidaichhan Asambhav bichhadinu timro bhutkaal Aaj sambhav milan doharidaichha Shayad timro pratikchha le phal payechha," Priye.... Ani kina nagaru ta ma hataar? ---------------------------------- Tyo ek jana bhaile ke sanka gareko thiyo, diju le feri vayan garna bhyaisaksechha. Ali parkhinu parchha ni, kam-se-kam. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
surendras 0 Report post Posted January 25, 2005 first of, welcome to chautari. A Wonderful piece, which is refreshing and energizing one, indeed. Hope to read more of such feelings, please do continue. मनको खुसि मन भित्रै रह्यो मन फोर्न साकिएन मन दुख्या बेला भक्कानो फुट्यो ब्यथा त्यो थामिएन ! सुनौलो सपना यो आँखाभरि जुन-ताराको नगरी नगरे हुन्थ्यो पिछा मेरो तिम्रो छाँयाले यसरि ! नदेख्दा तिम्लाइ एकपल सखी सब सुन्य लाग्दछ मात्र एक झलकले सखी जिजिबिषा जाग्दछ ! कसरि भनुँ फर्केर आउनु भन्ने म छैन अब हे निष्ठुरी बगेको खोला फर्केला कसै छाडेको माया फर्केला र कसरि? ! जति म जान्छु झन् नजिक तिम्रो उति टाढिन्छ्यौ सुस्तरि म भने हाँस्न खोज्छु देखेर तिम्लाइ तर्किन्छौ तिमि आँखा तर्दौ कस्तरि ! साथ पाउँदामा जानिन उहिले दिल लगाउनलाई टाढा हुदा ऐले धिक्कारदै आफूलाई यो आँसु बगाउनलाई !! -सुरेन्द्र आर. श्रेष्ठ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dave 0 Report post Posted January 25, 2005 first of, welcome to chautari. A Wonderful piece, which is refreshing and energizing one, indeed. Hope to read more of such feelings, please do continue. मनको खुसि मन भित्रै रह्यो मन फोर्न साकिएन मन दुख्या बेला भक्कानो फुट्यो ब्यथा त्यो थामिएन ! सुनौलो सपना यो आँखाभरि जुन-ताराको नगरी नगरे हुन्थ्यो पिछा मेरो तिम्रो छाँयाले यसरि ! नदेख्दा तिम्लाइ एकपल सखी सब सुन्य लाग्दछ मात्र एक झलकले सखी जिजिबिषा जाग्दछ ! कसरि भनुँ फर्केर आउनु भन्ने म छैन अब हे निष्ठुरी बगेको खोला फर्केला कसै छाडेको माया फर्केला र कसरि? ! जति म जान्छु झन् नजिक तिम्रो उति टाढिन्छ्यौ सुस्तरि म भने हाँस्न खोज्छु देखेर तिम्लाइ तर्किन्छौ तिमि आँखा तर्दौ कस्तरि ! साथ पाउँदामा जानिन उहिले दिल लगाउनलाई टाढा हुदा ऐले धिक्कारदै आफूलाई यो आँसु बगाउनलाई !! -सुरेन्द्र आर. श्रेष्ठ Surendra G, Nice creation. Keep on going !!! Gud luck Alert : Dherai bhawana ma nabagnu hola hai.....hani pani huna sakchha !!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites