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#1 Jamee

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Posted 21 January 2005 - 04:12 PM


Priya...!
Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi
Na latthidai band bhayo
Tyo Nasha hau timi
Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko
Mero man ko dor hau timi
Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu
Sagar samma nai pugyeu
Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu
Maile bujhe priya
Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

Jahan heru jahan jau
Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi
Yadi nidauchhu ta
Sapanima bhetinchhau timi
Mero har khushi har dukkha
Har palharuma timi
Har pal sangai rahera pani
Priya,
Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai
Harayeka kiran hau timi
Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare
Harayeka chhaya hau timi
Tyo raat feri audaichha
Tyo joon pani lagnechha
Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon
Joon jhai lagnechha
Priya,
Auchhauki ki timi?
" When people come together, they find ways to separate "

Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.

#2 narayan_thapa007

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Posted 21 January 2005 - 04:28 PM

mero laagi yo asambhav chha priya....
ki ma timro man ko dhukdhuki hunsakchhu bhani....
tara ma timi sanga dherai nai maya garchhu priya......
tara sabai laai kin bhandai hiDu......

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Posted 22 January 2005 - 03:43 AM

QUOTE(Jamee @ Jan 21 2005, 04:12 PM)
Priya...!
Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi
Na latthidai band bhayo
Tyo Nasha hau timi
Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko
Mero man ko dor hau timi
Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu
Sagar samma nai pugyeu
Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu
Maile bujhe priya
Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

Jahan heru jahan jau
Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi
Yadi nidauchhu ta
Sapanima bhetinchhau timi
Mero har khushi har dukkha
Har palharuma timi
Har pal sangai rahera pani
Priya,
Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai
Harayeka kiran hau timi
Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare
Harayeka chhaya hau timi
Tyo raat feri audaichha
Tyo joon pani lagnechha
Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon
Joon jhai lagnechha
Priya,
Auchhauki ki timi?

 


What a wonderful piece this is. Beglai khalko ani dherai man chhune kavita aaj pahilo patak padhna paye chautarima. Thank you very much Jamee ji and warm welcome to come to chautari. And hoping to read more touching poems from you.
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#4 ram dotyal

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Posted 23 January 2005 - 04:59 AM


QUOTE(Jamee @ Jan 21 2005, 04:12 PM)
Priya...!
Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi
Na latthidai band bhayo
Tyo Nasha hau timi
Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko
Mero man ko dor hau timi
Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu
Sagar samma nai pugyeu
Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu
Maile bujhe priya
Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

Jahan heru jahan jau
Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi
Yadi nidauchhu ta
Sapanima bhetinchhau timi
Mero har khushi har dukkha
Har palharuma timi
Har pal sangai rahera pani
Priya,
Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai
Harayeka kiran hau timi
Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare
Harayeka chhaya hau timi
Tyo raat feri audaichha
Tyo joon pani lagnechha
Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon
Joon jhai lagnechha
Priya,
Auchhauki ki timi?

 



Priyasee, hataar kina ?

Aajai ta aaiichheu hataar kina?
Gara kuraa saath sangai
Kuraa prem kahaaneemaa
Sangai milera sunna
Kehee samaya laagchha nai,
Bichaleet chhau yati kina
Bachapanako muTu pheree joDna?
Man sanga man milna
Sur - taal milaauna
Purai umer panee bitna sakchha,
Jeevan yo khel hoina
Ki haansee khelee
KshaN bharmai puraa hos
Kehee tarangaharu lyaaunamaa
Jyaan panee jaana sakchha,
Aaj aaechheu, yahaa saath chheu
Ma chaahanchhu ki tyo
Aba ke chaahiyo jindageemaa
Je chha sabai bhandaa thulo chha
Jun haamro aaj pheree milan bhayo
SamarpaN ko samaya lyaaunalaaee
Shwaashaharu panee banda huna sakchhan,
Kasaiko najik hunu bhannu nai
Ki ta sansaar jaaos ki ta jeeu jyaan
Umerako garnu ke
Yahee din harauna panee saktachha !!


Maile saachera raakheko chhu bachapanakaa har palaharulaaee jun haamro ek amit smritee ho. Aaj yo ghaDeemaa aaee yahaa bheT bhayo ra dherai nai khushee laagyo. A very warm welcome to Chautari. I hope to talk many more in the coming moments. Where are you now, by the way?
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#5 Rainka_Shivani

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Posted 23 January 2005 - 06:03 AM


This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee. mad.gif tongue.gif
We can no longer have everything we want, we can be more than we imagined....!!

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Posted 24 January 2005 - 03:49 AM

QUOTE(Jamee @ Jan 21 2005, 04:12 PM)
Priya...!
Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi
Na latthidai band bhayo
Tyo Nasha hau timi
Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko
Mero man ko dor hau timi
Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu
Sagar samma nai pugyeu
Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu
Maile bujhe priya
Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

Jahan heru jahan jau
Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi
Yadi nidauchhu ta
Sapanima bhetinchhau timi
Mero har khushi har dukkha
Har palharuma timi
Har pal sangai rahera pani
Priya,
Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai
Harayeka kiran hau timi
Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare
Harayeka chhaya hau timi
Tyo raat feri audaichha
Tyo joon pani lagnechha
Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon
Joon jhai lagnechha
Priya,
Auchhauki ki timi?

 




QUOTE(Rohit Shahi @ Jan 23 2005, 04:59 AM)
QUOTE(Jamee @ Jan 21 2005, 04:12 PM)
Priya...!
Bihaniko adhuro sapana hau timi
Na latthidai band bhayo
Tyo Nasha hau timi
Haatko mutthi bata futkiyeko
Mero man ko dor hau timi
Tadha bhayeu chhuttiyeu
Sagar samma nai pugyeu
Tar Sagar ma pani chhuttiyeu
Maile bujhe priya
Mera aakha bata niskeko pavitra jal hau timi.

Jahan heru jahan jau
Bas dekhchhu timi nai timi
Yadi nidauchhu ta
Sapanima bhetinchhau timi
Mero har khushi har dukkha
Har palharuma timi
Har pal sangai rahera pani
Priya,
Tadha kasari bhai diyeu timi?

Prabhat ko lali dekhna napaudai
Harayeka kiran hau timi
Gham ke sakiyo din ko hare
Harayeka chhaya hau timi
Tyo raat feri audaichha
Tyo joon pani lagnechha
Timi hunechhau ta tyo joon
Joon jhai lagnechha
Priya,
Auchhauki ki timi?

 



Priyasee, hataar kina ?

Aajai ta aaiichheu hataar kina?
Gara kuraa saath sangai
Kuraa prem kahaaneemaa
Sangai milera sunna
Kehee samaya laagchha nai,
Bichaleet chhau yati kina
Bachapanako muTu pheree joDna?
Man sanga man milna
Sur - taal milaauna
Purai umer panee bitna sakchha,
Jeevan yo khel hoina
Ki haansee khelee
KshaN bharmai puraa hos
Kehee tarangaharu lyaaunamaa
Jyaan panee jaana sakchha,
Aaj aaechheu, yahaa saath chheu
Ma chaahanchhu ki tyo
Aba ke chaahiyo jindageemaa
Je chha sabai bhandaa thulo chha
Jun haamro aaj pheree milan bhayo
SamarpaN ko samaya lyaaunalaaee
Shwaashaharu panee banda huna sakchhan,
Kasaiko najik hunu bhannu nai
Ki ta sansaar jaaos ki ta jeeu jyaan
Umerako garnu ke
Yahee din harauna panee saktachha !!


Maile saachera raakheko chhu bachapanakaa har palaharulaaee jun haamro ek amit smritee ho. Aaj yo ghaDeemaa aaee yahaa bheT bhayo ra dherai nai khushee laagyo. A very warm welcome to Chautari. I hope to talk many more in the coming moments. Where are you now, by the way?

 


Dada, Is this your real story or just a poetry version. Seems to me, you both were very closed friends or.... tongue.gif from childhood. She is also from our heaven, I think. Below is here details (I found on her ID):

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Dipika
Surname: Shah
High School: Birendra Vidhyapith
Village/Town: Tikapur
District: Kailali
Current University/College: Citizen Welfare Education Society's (SCOE)
Subject: Culture
Town/City: Budhwar Wada, Malegaon
Place of Birth: No Information
Web site: No Information
Gender: Female


But where is this Budhwar Wada, Malegaon?

QUOTE(Shivani Shahi @ Jan 23 2005, 06:03 AM)
This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee.  mad.gif  tongue.gif

 


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#7 Rainka_Shivani

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Posted 25 January 2005 - 11:23 AM


QUOTE(KhemGurung @ Jan 24 2005, 03:49 AM)
Dada, Is this your real story or just a poetry version. Seems to me, you both were very closed friends or.... tongue.gif from childhood. She is also from our heaven, I think. 

But where is this Budhwar Wada, Malegaon?

On behalf of your brother, It's only poetry version and in fact she is also very good writer. Yes, they were very good friends from childhood. She is younger sister of our big family sister, not other. Before, she were studying in Mihipur of MP. Now she is studying in Malegaon. Malegaon is in Maharasthra and it takes 7 hrs to reach to Malegaon from Mumbai. Herdai jau aba Jeeja ra Saali ko poetry version kaha samma pugchha. tongue.gif

QUOTE(KhemGurung @ Jan 24 2005, 03:49 AM)
QUOTE(Shivani Shahi @ Jan 23 2005, 06:03 AM)
This kinds of stuffs sucks to me. I know, it's a poem and nothing more but even that I am a wife yar! Sawal hi paida nahin hota hai, kis biwi ko jalan nahin hotee.  mad.gif  tongue.gif

 


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Don't laugh on me, ok? huh?? mad.gif
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#8 Jamee

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Posted 25 January 2005 - 12:35 PM


Priya....

Euta sundar sapana
Maile feri herna suru gare
Jab afnai manma haat rakhi
Afailai sodhe tab
Manle dikkat na mani samjhayo,
"Jamee,
Nadeeka duii kinarara
Dharti ani aakash
Dhan ani hrin
Din ani raat
Andhyaro ani ujyalo
Ek aapasma mildainan
Tara aaj
Timra nayanle kehi dhun gaidaichhan
Asambhav bichhadinu timro bhutkaal
Aaj sambhav milan doharidaichha
Shayad timro pratikchha le phal payechha,"
Priye....
Ani kina nagaru ta ma hataar?

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Tyo ek jana bhaile ke sanka gareko thiyo, diju le feri vayan garna bhyaisaksechha. Ali parkhinu parchha ni, kam-se-kam.
" When people come together, they find ways to separate "

Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.

#9 surendras

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Posted 25 January 2005 - 02:05 PM

first of, welcome to chautari. A Wonderful piece, which is refreshing and energizing one, indeed. Hope to read more of such feelings, please do continue.

मनको खुसि मन भित्रै रह्यो
मन फोर्न साकिएन
मन दुख्या बेला भक्कानो फुट्यो
ब्यथा त्यो थामिएन !

सुनौलो सपना यो आँखाभरि
जुन-ताराको नगरी
नगरे हुन्थ्यो पिछा मेरो
तिम्रो छाँयाले यसरि !

नदेख्दा तिम्लाइ एकपल सखी
सब सुन्य लाग्दछ
मात्र एक झलकले सखी
जिजिबिषा जाग्दछ !

कसरि भनुँ फर्केर आउनु
भन्ने म छैन अब हे निष्ठुरी
बगेको खोला फर्केला कसै
छाडेको माया फर्केला र कसरि? !

जति म जान्छु झन् नजिक तिम्रो
उति टाढिन्छ्यौ सुस्तरि
म भने हाँस्न खोज्छु देखेर तिम्लाइ
तर्किन्छौ तिमि आँखा तर्दौ कस्तरि !


साथ पाउँदामा जानिन उहिले
दिल लगाउनलाई
टाढा हुदा ऐले धिक्कारदै आफूलाई
यो आँसु बगाउनलाई !!

-सुरेन्द्र आर. श्रेष्ठ

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Posted 25 January 2005 - 02:14 PM

QUOTE(surendras @ Jan 25 2005, 02:05 PM)
first of, welcome to chautari. A Wonderful piece, which is refreshing and energizing one, indeed. Hope  to read more of such feelings, please do continue.

मनको खुसि मन भित्रै रह्यो
मन फोर्न साकिएन
मन दुख्या बेला भक्कानो फुट्यो
ब्यथा त्यो थामिएन !

सुनौलो सपना यो आँखाभरि
जुन-ताराको नगरी
नगरे हुन्थ्यो पिछा मेरो
तिम्रो छाँयाले यसरि !

नदेख्दा तिम्लाइ एकपल सखी
सब सुन्य लाग्दछ
मात्र एक झलकले सखी
जिजिबिषा जाग्दछ !

कसरि भनुँ फर्केर आउनु
भन्ने म छैन अब हे निष्ठुरी
बगेको खोला फर्केला कसै
छाडेको माया फर्केला र कसरि? !

जति म जान्छु झन् नजिक तिम्रो
उति टाढिन्छ्यौ सुस्तरि
म भने हाँस्न खोज्छु देखेर तिम्लाइ
तर्किन्छौ तिमि आँखा तर्दौ कस्तरि !


साथ पाउँदामा जानिन उहिले
दिल लगाउनलाई
टाढा हुदा ऐले धिक्कारदै आफूलाई
यो आँसु बगाउनलाई !!

-सुरेन्द्र आर. श्रेष्ठ 



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