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#11 manoj

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Posted 24 November 2002 - 12:59 PM

muskaan ko jaadu timi
mero oth maa khelidinchheu
nachau nachau laagne man ma
utsav ko holi khelidinchheu
Manoj Regmi "swapnil"
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#12 Ramila

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Posted 24 November 2002 - 01:09 PM

Utsav ko hole posaak lai matra
Man ko holi hunchha arkai,
Rang ko holi niyam matra ho
Tara Man ko holi, holi arkai.

Best compliments,

Ramila Rai ..........................some words about tears in!

#13 manoj

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Posted 26 November 2002 - 12:20 PM

Ramila ji sarai ramailo kura garnu bho

khusi fakranchha muskaan maa
utsav nachchha holi rang maa
bhitra mul bahira jharanaa
man kai holi pokhinchha rang maa
Manoj Regmi "swapnil"
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#14 BalayarCB

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Posted 26 November 2002 - 12:44 PM

Manoj Bhai;
Great Jadaichha Ni? KTM Ko Hawa le Ta Timilai Sachchai Paribartan Gari-dido Rahechha. Kathmandu Pugyo Ki, Muktak Ko Khola ....


Jawos More La ....

#15 manoj

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Posted 27 November 2002 - 11:55 AM

haraayeko ateet napaayeko bhavisya
chiplidinchha bartamaan k garun

sapanaako sparsa aawaaz barbaraayeko
mai kahaa aaye ma k garun
Manoj Regmi "swapnil"
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#16 VKPradhan

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Posted 27 November 2002 - 02:32 PM

Aphnai khutta aphnai bancharo
Yo ke bho malai aaja?
Ma tardai thie prem ko nadee
Paani le nai polyo aaja.


yo mero tarfa bata....... biggrin.gif biggrin.gif

#17 Manasi

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Posted 28 November 2002 - 03:48 PM

Aaudai garnu jaadai garnu
Yo goreto na birsanu,
Due bachan mitha diera jaanu
Due bachan mitha liera jaanu
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It's a sad and stupid thing to have to proclaim yourself a revolutionary just to be a decent one.

#18 manoj

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Posted 29 November 2002 - 04:57 PM

dui din ko dindagaani
bhanchhan karkalaako paani
din raat aaune jaane
maya laayeko katti najaane
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#19 NaikSaroj

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Posted 03 December 2002 - 01:30 PM

Thatta hoina 'muktak' bhannu
Maathi kehi thatta bhaeka chhan,
Man ko bhaav man laae thaha chha
Mutu Nepali ka dukheka chhan,
sabai thauma haaso haina saathi
Aakhaharu rasaaeka chhan,
Due bachan maya ka gahira bhana
Mann ka Ddoka aile khulla bhaeka chhan.


#20 Yuvragyee Shah

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Posted 04 December 2002 - 12:09 PM

gau ko Pyakuli phool birsine lai
Sahar maa Sun Keshree ramro,
Ghar bahira ka aanshu na dekhne lai
'Stage' ko bhasan nai ramro,
Ke sunau aru lai kahani
Kati chha chhati ma dukkha hamro
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Naik ji, very nice pick up by you, thanks.




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