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#11 surendras

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Posted 25 January 2005 - 02:38 PM

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Alert : Dherai bhawana ma nabagnu hola hai.....hani pani huna sakchha !!!!

ha.. ha...
bhawana ta bhawana nai ho ni oina ra?In reality, I'm very realistic and practical. tongue.gif btw thanks for the compliment, you guy’s motivation will kick my enthusiasm to wrote more n more, of course.

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#12 ram dotyal

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Posted 25 January 2005 - 04:42 PM


QUOTE(Jamee @ Jan 25 2005, 12:35 PM)
"Jamee,
Nadeeka duii kinarara
Dharti ani aakash
Dhan ani hrin
Din ani raat
Andhyaro ani ujyalo
Ek aapasma mildainan
Tara aaj
Timra nayanle kehi dhun gaidaichhan
Asambhav bichhadinu timro bhutkaal
Aaj sambhav milan doharidaichha
Shayad timro pratikchha le phal payechha,"
Priye....
Ani kina nagaru ta ma hataar?

Timro Bichaar Maa Kina Dubdaichhu ?

Himal jhai aglo Dher chha prashnaharko
Mai du:khee sanga panee
Bichaaraharuko uDaan sanga
Timeelaaee panee saathai paaya
Manakaa aankhaaharu paglie
Timee nai bhana baru aba
Timro bichaar kina kheldaichha?
Mausam sanga jharne palaaune paatharu jhai
HiDee rahe, bhautaaree rahe
Dherai TaaDhaa aaeepugechhu
Jahaan ma maatrai chhu
Timee nai bhana
Ma aaphailaaee birsera
Timro bichaar kina gardaichhu?
Samudrako chhatee maa
Samudrakai laharharu sanga
Mitrataa panee gareko chhu
Laharharuko maajhamaa
Timeelaaee haansee rahekee paaye
Timee nai bhana aba
Timro bichaar kina aaudaichha?
Yasto chha mero hiDne goreToko dhwanee
Jahaan harek din geet gunjaaee hiDchhan
Tee shargam harumaa
Timrai miThaa boleeharu suninchhan
Timee nai bhana hey Priyashee....
Timro bichaara maa kina Dubdaichhu?
"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#13 Jamee

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Posted 26 January 2005 - 01:28 PM


Jo bityo so bityo nai
Aau aba naya sapana sajau
Khali raheko koro kagatma
Hami naya itihaas rachau
Purana ra dhamila rekhaharuma
Naya yugko chitra banau
kala Seta aKsharharuma
Milanko Indra Dhanush milau
Bholi aune bihaniko lagi
Manama naya deep jalau
Jo haraye aashaka jyotiharu
Feri tinlai Roshnile sajau
Saath jhelliraheko andhakarlai tyagera
Feri ujyalo tira prasthan garau
Pal pal kaati raheka ekla panharuma
Surilo sangeet milau
Purano smriti bhitra harai raheko manlai
Jivanko naya aadhar banau
Priya.....
Jo bityo so bityo nai
Aau aba naya sapana sajau.
" When people come together, they find ways to separate "

Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.

#14 narayan_thapa007

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Posted 27 January 2005 - 08:38 PM

Priya...... bho na aau ba timi.... mero jeevan ma....

berthai rahechha timro samjhnaa ma ansu bagauna
timi ta rahichhai nisthrui balla jaane aaj
timi sanga chokho man ko bhawanaa jode kin
thulo bhool gare maile ....... priya...... jo timi sanga pani maile chokho maya khoje

ab timilaai bhooli dinchhu...jindagi bhari ko laagi
haasi haasi bitai dinchhu baaki jeevan timilai ek nisthuri samjhai

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#15 KalluG

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Posted 28 January 2005 - 03:42 AM


This poetry version is doubtful to me. biggrin.gif biggrin.gif But it's truth, the version is very great and nice ever I read so far. Please! do continue this version.
What qualities do I have that someone might envy !!.........................Khemraj Gurung.

#16 Rainka_Shivani

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Posted 28 January 2005 - 11:19 AM


QUOTE(KhemGurung @ Jan 28 2005, 03:42 AM)
This poetry version is doubtful to me.  biggrin.gif  biggrin.gif

I think, you are scaring to me. huh.gif

We can no longer have everything we want, we can be more than we imagined....!!

#17 ram dotyal

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Posted 30 January 2005 - 02:54 AM


QUOTE(Shivani Shahi @ Jan 28 2005, 11:19 AM)
QUOTE(KhemGurung @ Jan 28 2005, 03:42 AM)
This poetry version is doubtful to me.  biggrin.gif  biggrin.gif

I think, you are scaring to me. huh.gif

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Hajurharu duee janaa bichamaa na naachnu ta yaa nira! Hajur haruko doubtful/undoubtful kuraaharu arkai tira gardaa panee hunchha, hunna? mad.gif tongue.gif Kee ta dubaile yastai Kavitaa version suru garda hunchha, that will be fine.

QUOTE(Jamee @ Jan 26 2005, 01:28 PM)
Jo bityo so bityo nai
Aau aba naya sapana sajau
Khali raheko koro kagatma
Hami naya itihaas rachau
Purana ra dhamila rekhaharuma
Naya yugko chitra banau
kala Seta aKsharharuma
Milanko Indra Dhanush milau
Bholi aune bihaniko lagi
Manama naya deep jalau
Jo haraye aashaka jyotiharu
Feri tinlai Roshnile sajau
Saath jhelliraheko andhakarlai tyagera
Feri ujyalo tira prasthan garau
Pal pal kaati raheka ekla panharuma
Surilo sangeet milau
Purano smriti bhitra harai raheko manlai
Jivanko naya aadhar banau
Priya.....
Jo bityo so bityo nai
Aau aba naya sapana sajau.

Priyashee.....Ke Yo Sambhav Holaa ?

Aaphai tukrie
Aaphai haraae
Pheree paaeelaa niyaalee
Aaphulaaee sambhaale
KaN kaN maaTo thupaaree
Tukraa Tukraa Dhungaa sameTee
EuTaa baseraa banaae
Ke tyo baseraa pheree toDer
Hinaameenaa paarn
Ke yo sambhav holaa?
AaMshoo le gaaro malee
Haatakaa haDDeeharule
ChaTTaanakaa Tukraaharu nikhaaree
Du:kh sukhakaa rangaharu potee
EuTaa sukhee mahal banaae
Tyasai du:kh sukhako smritilaaee
Pheree chhiyaa chhiyaa paarn
Ke yo sambhav holaa?
Duee aaMkhaale herine eutai vastu
Duee haatale bajne eutai taalee
Duee khuTTaale hiDeene eutai chaal
Nadeeko eutai roop
Paaneeko eutai ansh
EuTai roop ra euTai ansh maathee
Teen teen woTaa bhaaree
Teen teen woTaa kahaanee
Ra aaphu teenai sang ekai saath
Ke yo sambhav holaa?
Socheko kahilyei pugdaina
Bitekaa pal kahilyei doharinnan
Mareko jeev kahilyei farkinn
Bagne paanee rokidain
Baadal kahilyei shaant hunnan
Mritue haamro nischay chh ek din
Tyo dinalaaee ek palako laagee bhae panee
Parkh bhaner rokna sakinn,
Yastai yastai aadhaaramaa
Ubhiee rahekaa chhau haamee
Priyashee......ke yo sambhav holaa ?
"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#18 Jamee

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Posted 30 January 2005 - 07:47 AM


Priya...

Chirera hera chahnchhau bhane mutu mero
Gadhiyera baseko chha yasma timrai maya
Chahat bata tadha hune koshis kina garchhau?
Mayaluko satta nisthuri huna kina khojdaichhau?
Timra sabdaharuko dhunle
Shayad bhulna agraha gardaichhan
Gahan hos yo timilai
Premiharu bhulna bhanda baru
Marnai tayar hunchhan
Vishwas ta chha nai yo ki
Timi pani hau mera premi
Maya ho mero kunai bhram hoina premi
Kasari timilai yo sab bhanu ma?
Ki bas timilai nai chahanchhu ma
Yadi ma mathi vishwaas nabhaye timilai
Jyan nai chha hajir mero chahe je gara malai
Tar mero mayalai yasari sajay nadeu
Ki sacheki chhu jun maya maile
Yaslai amar rahan deu
Hera, bato hid-da hid-dai
Chahannan kohi tyasai kasailai
Mero maya bachpan dekhiko
Preet dorile yaha doryai lyayeko ho
Timro muhar maile
Afno aakhama sajai rakheki chhu
Man ma basai rakheki chhu
Shwasharuma badhi rakheki chhu
Jindagima bhuli dina tyati sajilo chhaina
Lekhera man ma kasaiko naam ek patak
Feri tyaslai sajilai metauna sakidaiana
Priya.....aashuma lukayera
Thopa thopa gari bagauna pani sakidaina.
" When people come together, they find ways to separate "

Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.

#19 ram dotyal

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Posted 02 February 2005 - 09:29 AM


Ma chaTTaan ta hoin ......

Laagchh manamaa mero panee
Ma niShThuree ta hoin
Manavakai roop hun
Kunai chaTTaan ta hoin
Ke garnu karmako kuraa
Bhaagyale lekhee diyo
Karm paradeshee bhaee diyo,
Janmeko ThaauM
Pahilo maaTo suMgheko dharti
Tee nadee tee naalaa
Tee okaalee oraaleeharu
Tee chanchal jharanaaharu
Ani tee hariyaa faaTaharu
Bachapanamai alaggie
Priyasheekaa palaharu
Tee smriteemai gabhie
Laxman rekhaa paar garekaa goDaale
Nayaa jeevan ko bhaar uThaale,
Tee sangai hiDekaa goreTaaharu
GoreTaa pachheekaa
Kachchi saDakaharu
Ani kachchee saDakaharu pachheekaa
Pakki saDakaharu
Tee sadakamaathee bataassier guDne saadhanaharu
Ra haamro bhijnu
Tee prakritikaa Kriyaakalaapaharu sang....
Taazaa nai chh ajhai yo manamaa
Baraalier aauchhan
Meraa har palaharumaa
Priyashee,
Mero panee hriday chh
Ma panee maanav nai hoo
Ma chaTTaan ta hoin !!
"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#20 Jamee

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Posted 11 February 2005 - 03:57 PM


Priya....

Na dohryau chattanko khanak
Manushyako man chattan hunna
Kalila bhavanaharu saath liee
Nirdosh godale hideka
Ti goreta mathi chhapiyeka
Pailaka nishanharu
Na ta panile metauna sakchha
Na ta mato le purna
Na ta chattanle nai chhopna,
Hudai nabhayeka Ramjung jutta karkhana
Ani shilpi pokhari
Ra tinkai kura gari din bitaunuko mahatto
Ya timro manlai thaha hola
Ya merai manlai thaha chha
Kyampa ka ramaila kshyanharu hun
Ya Katase ka chisa bihaniharu
Lamkika ramaila dinharu hun
Ya Pahalmanpur ka ghatanaharu
Karnaliko Feri tardai ani Ghodaghodima Nau chalaudai
Bitayeka ti swarnim dinharu hun
Ya Attariya ra Godawarima bitayeka dinharu hun
Ya ta Tikapurka ti Juneli ratharu
Jab sametinchhan man bhitra
Taba samjhanako andhi auchha
Udayera lagi dinchha tyahi
Jaha ma sirf timilai paudachhu,
Priya...
Man pagle main Batti
Jame hunchha chattan
Tara manushyako man ho nai paglanaka lagi
So pagliyo, paglirahechha ra paglirahanechha
Samjhanako andhi timro
Mero jivanma hardam aairahanechha.
" When people come together, they find ways to separate "

Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.




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