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#1 Raghuveer MV Shahi

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Posted 18 November 2002 - 12:04 PM

Dear all colleagues and non-colleagues friends,

Let's do share here your 'Muktaks and Gazals' with your friends openly as well as an old forum.


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Ma ramro na ramro kina herau,
Visraam ka laagee phursat nai paaedaina bhane
Ma Baar, Gate ani Saaet kina herau,
Marera jaanu nai chha bholee bhane
Ma Aushadhi paani vyarthai maa kina garau."


#2 Deepa Pal

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Posted 19 November 2002 - 02:26 PM

pagliera Chattan ko parvat
Saagar tira bagna thalechha,
Sadaiva haasne ra hasaaune mutu
Kina aaja aaphai neeraas bhaechha.

regards,

Deepa S P Pal

#3 Deena_Magar

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Posted 20 November 2002 - 12:14 PM

Chattan Naam diera nirjeev tullyaae die
Thes lage hidda thukera hidi die,
Tyas ko pani hola kehi marma bujhne le bujhi die
Tyo pani ta vastu ho, tyas ko pani chha ki 'MANN'
Kaslaae ke thaha?

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#4 surajmg

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Posted 21 November 2002 - 04:11 PM

namaste to all

phool bani autyouni sapanima
bipani ma kina kada bani diyou
afnai bani dinthyouni chattingma
bhetera kina parai bani diyou

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#5 Deepa Pal

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Posted 21 November 2002 - 04:26 PM

Phool vastra khosera lagyo seet Hreetu le
Bas Kada ko Haddi matra chhodee diyo,
Chahana le hoina ye hajur
Majbooree le tada banaae diyo.

regards,

Deepa S P Pal

#6 manoj

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Posted 21 November 2002 - 05:39 PM

aashai aashmaa bitne jiwan
timi aasha mero ma jiwan
praanai futkanchha jasto hunchha
timi mai haraaidinchha yo man
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#7 Padma Pandey

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Posted 22 November 2002 - 12:32 PM

Aash ra niraas yee due
Atut stambha hun Jeevan ka,
Aash madhyam ho pragati ko
Niraas vifal madhyam ho Jeevan,
Tara pani tyasaree haraae rahan laae
Tyatee sasto chhaina Jeevan.


Cheers !
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#8 prachi

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Posted 22 November 2002 - 01:47 PM

Tuteko Dil ko sama banera
Dil ko tajmahal bata aaunu timee,
Aarzoo jun chha mero Dil maa
Tyo gunjan banee dinu timee.


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#9 Naaz

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Posted 23 November 2002 - 09:50 AM

Bihaanee ko laali bani
Dillagi laae lyaunu timee,
Saat sur ko sangeet banee
Tuteko dil laae rasaaunu timee.


cheers.....!
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#10 ramkharel

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Posted 23 November 2002 - 12:23 PM

very nice section here saathiharu!

keep posting more.....so nice to read all those lovely muktaks

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