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#1 ram dotyal

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Posted 03 June 2009 - 05:21 AM


मुक्त नभएका मुक्तकहरु !

I am not a poet neither a writer or you can say nothing else biggrin.gif But you smell that, a small man alone in a big room with the past memories, trying to get human feelings right. So here we go....


ती सँग नाता जोडिन मैले
किनकी ती पहिले
सम्झौता गर्न चाहन्थे,
तर नाता जस सँग
मनैले जोडे मैले
तिनैले पछी सम्झौता गरे।।


Have a good day to all !!
"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#2 Mohan Bikram Thapa

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Posted 03 June 2009 - 06:47 AM

राम जि छोटो मिठो मुक्तक रइछ ल !
Naya Bichar from Naya Patrika
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#3 ram dotyal

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Posted 03 June 2009 - 07:23 AM


धन्यवाद थापा जी !

One more here...

"कमीला ले पनि जान्द्छ
आफ्नो मूलभूत अधिकार
एवं कर्मको बारेमा,
र त्यसैले शायद
त्यो गइरहेछ आफ्नो
ईतीहासको पुस्तकालय तर्फ !!"

"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#4 Mohan Bikram Thapa

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Posted 03 June 2009 - 10:07 AM

ओ हो ! राम जि मुक्त नभएका मुक्तकलाई अघाडी सारेकोमा हजुरलाई मुरी मुरी धन्यवाद ।
Naya Bichar from Naya Patrika
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#5 ram dotyal

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Posted 06 June 2009 - 01:21 AM


Thank you Thapa Jee !! One more...hai ta !

उल्लू ले उल्लू माथि कविता लेख्यो
र पुरुष्कार पनि पायो
एउटा उल्लू कै हात बाट,
तब यसमा गल्ती के भयो?


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"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#6 Mohan Bikram Thapa

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Posted 07 June 2009 - 05:05 PM

नहसाउनु हजुर पनि कस्तो कस्तो कस्ले भनोत हजुरलाई उल्लू मैले भनेको छैन । मुक्तकहरु राम्रो छन लेखदै जानु हामी पढ्ने त हो ।
Naya Bichar from Naya Patrika
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#7 Jamee

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Posted 08 June 2009 - 03:40 PM


QUOTE (ram dotyal @ Jun 3 2009, 05:21 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
ती सँग नाता जोडिन मैले
किनकी ती पहिले
सम्झौता गर्न चाहन्थे,
तर नाता जस सँग
मनैले जोडे मैले
तिनैले पछी सम्झौता गरे।।


फैलाएनौ हाथ तिमीले
कहिल्यै कही पनी
तर पनी,
खोलेर तिम्रा हाथ
तिम्रो हथेलीमा राखिदिए मैले
आफ्नो हिस्साको आकाश।


" When people come together, they find ways to separate "

Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.

#8 prachi

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Posted 10 June 2009 - 02:24 PM


कही पनी जाउ तिमी
दोष तिम्रै नाउ सित छ,
हातका रेखाहरु
अर्कै होलान शायद,
तर तिम्रा पैतला को आवाज
पूर्ण दोष रहीत छ।


This world is so wide that even if you flitted around and around it, you would never reach the end of it.



#9 ram dotyal

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Posted 15 June 2009 - 05:44 AM


QUOTE (mthapa @ Jun 7 2009, 06:05 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}>
नहसाउनु हजुर पनि कस्तो कस्तो कस्ले भनोत हजुरलाई उल्लू मैले भनेको छैन । मुक्तकहरु राम्रो छन लेखदै जानु हामी पढ्ने त हो ।


तमासा सम्झनु हुन्छ भने
तमासा नै सही,
तर
धेरै फरक पर्नेछ
मेरो यो तमासा ले नै।।
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"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#10 Preeti Shrestha

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Posted 18 June 2009 - 11:45 AM


संसारमा उज्यालो भनेको
अँध्यारो रहेछ,
उज्यालो भनेको
जन्म नलिनु नै.....
यथार्थ रहेछ ।

The better you know someone, the less there is to stay. Or maybe, there's less that need to be said.




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