How about some haiku
Started by surendras, Mar 27 2005 05:38 AM
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#11
Devchan
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Posted 23 May 2005 - 11:05 AM
१ सुकेको रुख
भत्किएको पर्खाल
जीर्ण नेपाल ।
२ चोरको गल्ली
सत्यको उपहास
थुक्क यो जुनी !
३ आर्लाम घन्टी
बजेछ सबेरै
उठू कि अब ?
४ माटोको माया
उम्लेछ भलभली
परदेशमा ।
५ असारै याम
मायाको खहरेले
बगाएछ है !
----------------------देवचन ॥
#12
Devchan
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Posted 24 May 2005 - 08:03 AM
१
सानो गोरेटो
सिउंडीको पर्खाल
घोच्छ कि कतै ?
२
घरझगडा
दाजुभाईको कल
तान्डव जात्रा ।
३
शुष्क संसार
दु:खसन्तप्त मन
समवेदना ।
--------------------देवचन ( २२/मे/२००५ )
सानो गोरेटो
सिउंडीको पर्खाल
घोच्छ कि कतै ?
२
घरझगडा
दाजुभाईको कल
तान्डव जात्रा ।
३
शुष्क संसार
दु:खसन्तप्त मन
समवेदना ।
--------------------देवचन ( २२/मे/२००५ )
#13
surendras
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Posted 28 May 2005 - 09:06 AM
Thank you all, rohita da,najneen di, zen_spirit,dream noon and devchanjee for your participations and wonderful haikus. Let's keep the ball rolling.
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हप्ताभरिको थकान
छरपष्ट पीडाहरु
शनिबारको साँझ
२
बन्दुकको कुन्डा
बुटको बज्राई
निरिह मुहार
३
खहरेको भेल
मनसुनको बर्षा
प्यास शान्तिको
-सुरेन
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हप्ताभरिको थकान
छरपष्ट पीडाहरु
शनिबारको साँझ
२
बन्दुकको कुन्डा
बुटको बज्राई
निरिह मुहार
३
खहरेको भेल
मनसुनको बर्षा
प्यास शान्तिको
-सुरेन
" A lost Son"
#14
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Posted 17 July 2005 - 06:43 AM
1.
jhyal bahira jhari runchha
keyboard ko taalsangai
byasta, chiso yo cafe
2.
sammohit harek chehara
screen mai bilayejhai
awaaz matra khat-khat-khat
3.
font ho ki
kamila ko parade
feri bhulechhu chasma
... (((:-) ))) ...
#15
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Posted 17 July 2005 - 12:34 PM
Haiku Poems are really nice,I used to read many from CheetraPratap Adhikari .Thanks for reminding
Wichtig ist was der Man tun,nicht wie er Aussieht...
#16
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Posted 23 July 2005 - 02:01 PM
Really nice guys.
Going through this topic I also thought why not give a try. This is my first. Here we go...
Going through this topic I also thought why not give a try. This is my first. Here we go...
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#17
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Posted 31 August 2005 - 12:11 PM
1.
Mero thegana
Achham Tadigaira
Avasya aaunu.
2.
Phool fakriye
Man rangiyo
basant aayo.
3.
Dharti sajiyo
Baja bajna thale
Baishakh aayo.
4.
Jooneli raat
Sapanaharuko saath
Timro yaad.
5.
Barsyo prem
Naya mausam
Man-mutav ant.
6.
Timi nai bhana
Anyay atyachaar
Kahaan chhaina?
7.
Samudra haina
Bageka Nadee
Dubeko dharti.
8.
Sneh chhaina
Droh ko hodbaji
Buddha ko desh.
9.
Jivan ko suder sapana
Dekhtai gareka
Futeka aakha haru.
10.
Na jhyal na Dhoka
Bhitra bata aawaz
Bhatkeko ghar.
" When people come together, they find ways to separate "
Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.
Kashmira Shah (Jamee)
Maale Gaon, Maharasthra, India.
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Sushil Pradhan
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Posted 03 September 2005 - 07:33 AM
Nice nice, very nice. Keep it up friends.
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Posted 27 September 2005 - 01:31 PM
Bina lakshyako
Gunjirahechh bhashan
Haraunechhan sabai.
Kehi thorai hos
Tar satya hos
Garau ki prayas?
Galti garinchha
Sajay ta painchha nai
Feri kina runu-dhunu?
Ghamand garchhan
Taul nahuneharu
kaha chha sudhar?
Edited by Naaz, 27 September 2005 - 01:32 PM.
Even though we know how far apart we are, it helps to think we might be wishing on the same bright star. And the night wind start to sing a lonesome lullaby, it helps to think we're sleeping underneath the same big sky.
#20
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Posted 28 November 2005 - 09:40 AM
blank pages i read
and thankfully
find things still unerased
...
couple upatairs
quarreling over money
pathetic midnight
...
dead mouse
grinning in the cold mud
lapping dirty Ikshunadi
...
and thankfully
find things still unerased
...
couple upatairs
quarreling over money
pathetic midnight
...
dead mouse
grinning in the cold mud
lapping dirty Ikshunadi
...
... (((:-) ))) ...
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