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#21 Floreince Kadayat

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Posted 09 December 2002 - 10:14 AM

Yatree hos ya na hos
Sajieka nai chhan bata haru,
Jatee hide ni na katine
Jeevan ka hun yee path haru,
Premi rahun ya na rahun
Rahane chhan amar prem ka pana haru.


#22 manoj

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Posted 09 December 2002 - 10:23 AM

jindagi khai k bhanu
haaso aashu ko misran jasto
haaso aaye udaaidinchha
aashu le dubaaidinchha
aafno bihe maa jaadai garda
behuli mareko khabar jasto
Manoj Regmi "swapnil"
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#23 Floreince Kadayat

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Posted 09 December 2002 - 10:36 AM

Ho nai,
Jindagi khai ke bhannu bujhnai garho
Bujhi sake pachhi chhalna garho,
Sukkha bhae haasi sahana garho
Dukkha bhae dard sahana garho,
Je pani garho yaha tara pani
Tyas mai sukkha ra dukkha anubhav pani garinchha yaha,
Yas mai umer katna sake
Yas mai rangina sake,
Ani ta aru ke nai chha ra?
Mare pachhi ke hola ra yatee sarho?


#24 Preeti Shrestha

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Posted 09 December 2002 - 01:24 PM

Basmati ko ghol ma basne parewa udera
Kun chahi desh ma gayo lekhnu,
Aae sabai masaum yaha tara
Aaena timro khabar lekhnu,
Birsera jaane nisthuree ko
Chhadai chha mann ma tasveer lekhnu,
Samaya le saath na die
Kaam aaena timro aushadhi lekhnu.

The better you know someone, the less there is to stay. Or maybe, there's less that need to be said.

#25 apala

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Posted 10 December 2002 - 05:44 PM

Timee na huda kata kata
Aphai adhuree jasto lagchha,
Baaris ko mausam chha tara
Varsha dharti bata Aakash tira uthe jasto lagchha,
Din haru pani yatee laama huna thaale
Timee sanga bhet na bha ko yugau yug jasto lagchha.

best regards,

Friendship is a single soul dwelling in two bodies....remember it!

#26 kamal

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Posted 10 December 2002 - 06:33 PM

timilaee jastai malaee pani
testai testai hunchha.
chadai ghar pharki timro angalo ma
luku luko jasto lagchha


aakash tira udeko paani hiun bani jarirahechha
aba tadpai ko ghadi lamo chhaina,
milan ka ghadi aaee rahechhan
:::::::::::Life is beautiful:::::::::::

#27 Pallavi Khanal

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Posted 11 December 2002 - 03:43 PM

QUOTE(Yescha @ Nov 26 2002, 12:55 PM)


Yo Duniya Ho, Maya Ko-Maya Garne Ko
Aakha Agadhi ko Maya Matrai Pujne Ho



Sacchikai maya le ho ya
Ya mausam ko hawa le ho,
Mann bhitra ko dhadkan ho ya
Ya mukhaile thikka ho,
Zamaana ko dekha sekhi ho ya
Ya aphnai hridaya ko bhasha ho.

regards,

A Spouse is someone who'll stand by you through all the trouble you wouldn't have had if you'd stayed single.

#28 ram dotyal

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Posted 12 December 2002 - 07:41 AM

Pallavi sister, here is the response to your muktak.

Haad haru kaa stambha maa ubhieko chhu
Ke mausam ko haawa hunthyo,
Dhadkan le nai baachi rahechhu ahile samma
Awaaz ta mero pahile nai maree sakyo,
Zamaanaa herne aba taaqat nai rahena
Yo mero hRidayako tadpan ho
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Edited by rvpvsr1975, 12 December 2002 - 07:43 AM.

"Some goals are so worthy it's glorious even to fail"

#29 manoj

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Posted 12 December 2002 - 01:56 PM

QUOTE(preetybeauty @ Dec 9 2002, 01:24 PM)
Basmati ko ghol ma basne parewa udera
Kun chahi desh ma gayo lekhnu,
Aae sabai masaum yaha tara
Aaena timro khabar lekhnu,
Birsera jaane nisthuree ko
Chhadai chha mann ma tasveer lekhnu,
Samaya le saath na die
Kaam aaena timro aushadhi lekhnu.

very nice preety jee

jaane ta jaanchhan
kohi maya maari kohi kara le
pratikshaa laai aashu milchha
rudaina kohi rahar le
taipani man bujhaaunai paryoo
milaayeko thiyo chhutaaune le

Manoj Regmi "swapnil"
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#30 Zasmeen

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Posted 12 December 2002 - 02:09 PM

Varsha ko rup eutai hunchha
Tara bhel rang nai rang ko rawanee,
Jeevan ho gham chhaya
kaile chiso ta kaile taato pani,
Khusboo ta Nepali ko naam mai hunchha
Garau ki aru china jaani
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Edited by Zasmeen, 12 December 2002 - 02:09 PM.

warm regards,

Zasmeen Vanu




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