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Ghazals (rhythm of love and passion)


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#21 Naaz

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Posted 24 July 2004 - 01:24 PM


Thank you to all.
Even though we know how far apart we are, it helps to think we might be wishing on the same bright star. And the night wind start to sing a lonesome lullaby, it helps to think we're sleeping underneath the same big sky.

#22 surendras

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Posted 27 July 2004 - 01:19 AM

thanx narayanjee,

timeele chaahyou
maile pani chaahe!
timeele maayaa garyou
maile pani maayaa gare!
timeele baachaa diyou
maile pani baachaa diye!

Tara pani antyamaa-
timi haasyou........!
ma haasna sakin!!

" A lost Son"

#23 Rainka_Shivani

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Posted 28 July 2004 - 08:56 AM

QUOTE (surendras @ Jul 27 2004, 01:19 AM)
Tara pani antyamaa-
timi haasyou........!
ma haasna sakin!!

What actually is in your heart then....? biggrin.gif Tara sabdaharu mitha chhan hai! tongue.gif
We can no longer have everything we want, we can be more than we imagined....!!

#24 Ramila

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Posted 30 July 2004 - 03:42 PM


Sirani siranima timi rahadai gara
Sapanana jo aaulan aankhama aaudai gara

Bandh aankhako timi kiran hau
kahile kahi khulla aankhama pani aaune gara

Dhadkirahane manko timi shwaas hau
Khushima sangeet pani sunaune gara

Ranga manko tyahi chha seto
Umanga bhai yaslai pani sajaune gara

Eklai basta manma tirharule ghochlaan
Pidako aushadhi pani liera jane gara !!



Best compliments,

Ramila Rai ..........................some words about tears in!

#25 Rainka_Shivani

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Posted 31 July 2004 - 02:10 AM

That's a cool one Ramila ji.
We can no longer have everything we want, we can be more than we imagined....!!

#26 surendras

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Posted 01 August 2004 - 11:51 AM

QUOTE (Shivani Shahi @ Jul 28 2004, 08:56 AM)
QUOTE (surendras @ Jul 27 2004, 01:19 AM)
Tara pani antyamaa-
timi haasyou........!
ma haasna sakin!!

What actually is in your heart then....? biggrin.gif Tara sabdaharu mitha chhan hai! tongue.gif

you know it, what i had in my heart. of course guilt feel for being cheated and fooled all around biggrin.gif biggrin.gif
thanks for comment bhauju!
" A lost Son"

#27 surendras

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Posted 01 August 2004 - 02:47 PM

Bibashtaa

khutta khochchaee khochchaee bhae pani
ukaali oralli garnai parne!
mana bitra birahako jwala mukhi lie
aankha sunniya pani hasnai parne!
yahi ho saathiharu bibastaa jindagiko!!
" A lost Son"

#28 prachi

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Posted 13 August 2004 - 03:17 AM


Gaun ghar ki dukhiyari ra gaun ghar kaa dukhiyara haruko pida euta Ghazal ko rup maa:

Samjhanaharu batuli mutu bhitra bhagya jagaune garchhu
Timro kalpana bagi timro tasveer banaune garchhu,

jab smajhana lamo hunchha, jab samjhana purano aaidinchha
aakash kaa tara harulai afno kahaanee sunaune garchhu,

jab sharir sithil hunchha tab ek pida mutu maa ubjidinchha
dukkhai dukh le jaleko manalai aanshule nibhauine garchhu,

kasari sunau ma mera bedana haru sansaar lai?
ekanta maa roi roi khushi hune koshis garchhu,

sukhi rahanu timi ghar chhodi paradesh basne manchhe
khabar ta pathau ki ke ma pani timro samjhana maa aauchhu?


This world is so wide that even if you flitted around and around it, you would never reach the end of it.



#29 makardhoj

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Posted 13 August 2004 - 09:54 AM

QUOTE(ShahiPranita @ Aug 13 2004, 03:17 AM)
Gaun ghar ki dukhiyari ra gaun ghar kaa dukhiyara haruko pida euta Ghazal ko rup maa:

Samjhanaharu batuli mutu bhitra bhagya jagaune garchhu
Timro kalpana bagi timro tasveer banaune garchhu,

jab smajhana lamo hunchha, jab samjhana purano aaidinchha
aakash kaa tara harulai afno kahaanee sunaune garchhu,

jab sharir sithil hunchha tab ek pida mutu maa ubjidinchha
dukkhai dukh le jaleko manalai aanshule nibhauine garchhu,

kasari sunau ma mera bedana haru sansaar lai?
ekanta maa roi roi khushi hune koshis garchhu,

sukhi rahanu timi ghar chhodi paradesh basne manchhe
khabar ta pathau ki ke ma pani timro samjhana maa aauchhu?

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regards,

No man is a good doctor who has never been sick himself.

#30 Sushil Pradhan

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Posted 13 August 2004 - 12:14 PM

QUOTE(ShahiPranita @ Aug 13 2004, 03:17 AM)
sukhi rahanu timi ghar chhodi paradesh basne manchhe
khabar ta pathau ki ke ma pani timro samjhana maa aauchhu?

A wonderful ghazal sister, thanks for the touching piece.

Gau ghar ka dukhiyara haruko man maa je chha yaha pani tyahi nai chha ra uttikai chha. I miss you my friends.....!!

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