hiddenmindneo 0 Report post Posted October 28, 2004 You say you love me but you always front! You do care for me, But whenever you want! What about me? Don’t you care?I say meet me, But you’re never there! I find out that you were with your boy. Why do you do this? Am I just a toy? You’ve toyed with my emotions, You’ve played with my heart. I hope you understand That you torn me apart! I find the numbers and I hear the calls. Not wanting to believe it Not any of it all! I try to ignore it And let it pass. I say, "What’s done is done, And what’s in the past is the past." When we’re alone You hug and touch me. But when we’re out You don’t even see me. When we met I didn’t think it was much But know I know And how I wish for your touch. Back then, I thought that You seen something in me That no one else did But I guess it was all a dream. You’ve torn up my heart, In every possible way. You’ve stabbed it, shot it, And stored it away. I think it’s time for me to leave. I’ve been lied to, Cheated on and even deceived. Good-bye. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Limitation//Moon 0 Report post Posted October 28, 2004 It's damn touchy.. greatly written. Looks like you have lot of feelings..well done Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sawmer 0 Report post Posted October 29, 2004 Its not hard to say good bye, you say u love me? Ho ra bhannea? Is that really true?I think it would be even more difficult that way..... Sameer...... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hiddenmindneo 0 Report post Posted October 29, 2004 It's damn touchy.. greatly written. Looks like you have lot of feelings..well done 58684[/snapback] Hi, after any years i have found a peson like ,who cares for other feelings & above all u r a person with poitive attitude. RGDS Hiddenmind Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
unknown soldier 0 Report post Posted October 29, 2004 Hi Hiddenmindneo, Your poem reminds me of a poem by an artist called Leonard Cohen which kind of answers to your poem. It goes like this: Hey, that’s no way to say goodbye. I loved you in the morning Our kisses deep and warm Your hair upon the pillow Like sleepy golden storm Yes many loved before us I know that we are not new In cities and in forests They smiled like me and you But it’s now come to distances Both of us must try Your eyes are soft with sorrow Hey, that’s no way to say goodbye No I am not looking for another As I wander in my time Walk me to the corner Our steps will always rhyme You know my love goes with you As your love stays with me It’s just the way it changes Like the shoreline and the sea But let’s not talk of love or chains And things we can’t untie Your eyes are soft with sorrow Hey, that’s no way to say goodbye ~~ by Leonard Cohen~~ uknown soldier Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BS 0 Report post Posted October 29, 2004 Its great job hiddenmindneo Please keep it up. Thanks Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Triene 0 Report post Posted October 30, 2004 Lovely poem but somethign bothers me here You’ve toyed with my emotions, You’ve played with my heart I dont agree in here..... cause no one can play with anyone`s heart unless they let them play by themselves. I know when you are hurted you say many things but in the very moment people forget that they cant clap with one hand. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pedestrian 0 Report post Posted November 17, 2004 Lovely poem but somethign bothers me here You’ve toyed with my emotions, You’ve played with my heart I dont agree in here..... cause no one can play with anyone`s heart unless they let them play by themselves. I know when you are hurted you say many things but in the very moment people forget that they cant clap with one hand. 58833[/snapback] love when grabs a mind it doesn't let you free yourself at any cost and time. yah, scentedsoul is true, one can't slap with one hand but the clapping thing is an exception in this case as it has to do with heart. a blow is painful. when a person has to deceive even his eyes lie........so, you never know. p.s: i'm new here so don't mind me ......peace........ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shima 0 Report post Posted November 17, 2004 You Never Walk Alone You never walk alone, my friend Though you may think you do. For in your sorrow and despair God always walks with you. There is no hour, no passing day He is not by your side. And though unseen HE is still there To be your friend and guide. Whene'er you think you walk alone Reach out and you will find The hand of God to show the way And bring you peace of mind. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pedestrian 0 Report post Posted November 18, 2004 shima, nice and a true one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites