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IT'S NOT HARD TO SAY GOOD-BYE

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You say you love me but you always front!

You do care for me, But whenever you want!

What about me?

Don’t you care?I say meet me,

But you’re never there!

I find out that you were with your boy.

Why do you do this?

Am I just a toy?

You’ve toyed with my emotions,

You’ve played with my heart.

I hope you understand

That you torn me apart!

I find the numbers and I hear the calls.

Not wanting to believe it

Not any of it all!

I try to ignore it

And let it pass.

I say, "What’s done is done,

And what’s in the past is the past."

When we’re alone

You hug and touch me.

But when we’re out

You don’t even see me.

When we met

I didn’t think it was much

But know I know

And how I wish for your touch.

Back then, I thought that

You seen something in me

That no one else did

But I guess it was all a dream.

You’ve torn up my heart,

In every possible way.

You’ve stabbed it, shot it,

And stored it away.

I think it’s time for me to leave.

I’ve been lied to,

Cheated on and even deceived.

Good-bye.

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Its not hard to say good bye, you say u love me? Ho ra bhannea? Is that really true?I think it would be even more difficult that way.....

Sameer......

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It's damn touchy.. greatly written. Looks like you have lot of feelings..well done

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Hi,

after any years i have found a peson like ,who cares for other feelings & above all u r a person with poitive attitude.

RGDS

Hiddenmind

 

 

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Hi Hiddenmindneo,

 

Your poem reminds me of a poem by an artist called Leonard Cohen which kind of answers to your poem. It goes like this:

 

Hey, that’s no way to say goodbye.

 

 

I loved you in the morning

Our kisses deep and warm

Your hair upon the pillow

Like sleepy golden storm

Yes many loved before us

I know that we are not new

In cities and in forests

They smiled like me and you

But it’s now come to distances

Both of us must try

Your eyes are soft with sorrow

Hey, that’s no way to say goodbye

 

No I am not looking for another

As I wander in my time

Walk me to the corner

Our steps will always rhyme

You know my love goes with you

As your love stays with me

It’s just the way it changes

Like the shoreline and the sea

But let’s not talk of love or chains

And things we can’t untie

Your eyes are soft with sorrow

Hey, that’s no way to say goodbye

 

~~ by Leonard Cohen~~

 

uknown soldier

 

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Its great job hiddenmindneo Please keep it up.

Thanks

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Lovely poem but somethign bothers me here

 

You’ve toyed with my emotions,

You’ve played with my heart

 

I dont agree in here..... cause no one can play with anyone`s heart unless they let them play by themselves. I know when you are hurted you say many things but in the very moment people forget that they cant clap with one hand.

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Lovely poem but somethign bothers me here

 

You’ve toyed with my emotions,

You’ve played with my heart

 

I dont agree in here..... cause no one can play with anyone`s heart unless they let them play by themselves. I know when you are hurted you say many things but in the very moment people forget that they cant clap with one hand.

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love when grabs a mind it doesn't let you free yourself at any cost and time. yah, scentedsoul is true, one can't slap with one hand but the clapping thing is an exception in this case as it has to do with heart. a blow is painful. when a person has to deceive even his eyes lie........so, you never know.

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......peace........

 

 

 

 

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You Never Walk Alone

 

You never walk alone, my friend

 

Though you may think you do.

 

For in your sorrow and despair

 

God always walks with you.

 

There is no hour, no passing day

 

He is not by your side.

 

And though unseen HE is still there

 

To be your friend and guide.

 

Whene'er you think you walk alone

 

Reach out and you will find

 

The hand of God to show the way

 

And bring you peace of mind.

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