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#11 sujita

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Posted 14 September 2003 - 01:25 PM


Timile Kavita lekhna thaleko ta bhayo hola karib 17/18 varsh, hoina ra? School life ma ta jhan badhi lekhtheu jasto lagchha. Anyway, many thanks for presenting at the Kavi Kunj and your cool poem.
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#12 Vipasha Kshetri

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Posted 28 September 2003 - 12:47 PM

QUOTE (Sujita Lamichhane @ Sep 3 2003, 01:44 PM)

Asha Badi Kaviharuma, Chakra Balayar, Reema Gouchan, Vipasha Chhetri, pani katai vyastata mai harayeka jasta chhan.



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Will do later Diju. Please! wait me.
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#13 ramkharel

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Posted 01 October 2003 - 05:19 PM


Gayab Bhayo tyo prahar
Chhoto raftar ko Yatra Jasto
Mutu tyahi chautari mai chutyo mero
Geet bani Kaan ma gungidai
Afnai Jasto lagdathiyo malai
Ti ramjham ka din ani Shabda-Kosheli haru
chhu pratikchha mai feri ti palharu ko


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#14 KalluG

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Posted 09 October 2003 - 03:45 AM

QUOTE (ShahiPranita @ Oct 5 2003, 04:06 PM)
Aayee Deu Na Aba Mero Jeevan Thorai Chha

Aayee deu na aba mero jeevan thorai chha,
Timi nabhayera hola shayad
Khushiharuma pani muskan kamai chha!

Vachan diyera timi aayenau kina?
Timi yaha nabhayekole hola shayad
Ma basne shahar ma aaj roshani kam chha!

Khai ke bhayo kunni mausamharu lai pani,
Dhup ta chha dherai nai
Tara Joon ko aagman ma jooneli prabah kamai chha!

Aina herda man ma kehi sankoch lagyo,
Kehi na kehi ta chha kahi
Ki unko mitrata ma aajkal kehi kami chha!

Timi le garda aaj samma samarth chhu,
Yo duri le hola shayad
Bina timi timro samjhana ko raftar ma kami chha!
Aayee deu na aba mero jeevan thorai chha.........!!


Oh! balla aaj po yo Kavita padhna paye. Yo pani khatra raichha. jaos jaos bhauju aru pani. It was cool poem. Please! more.....!
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#15 Manasi

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Posted 10 October 2003 - 11:43 AM


All KAVIs have wonderful poems. Very good participants in this topic..WNSO Ka Kavi Haru Kaha gaye ? I really like this topic very much. Thanks to all WNSOs kAVIs for thier great contribution and poems. Please! do continue and post more good poems. Good luck to you all.

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#16 sujita

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Posted 10 October 2003 - 12:38 PM

QUOTE (BalayarCB @ Oct 9 2003, 10:25 AM)
Dijju;
Thanks a lot for remember me. And, Ashabadi HudaHudai Pani, Niraasha Ko Bhumari Sanga Laddaichhu ....

Anyway, here one from me....

Aashabaad Lai Aaj,
Niraasha Ko Changul Ma Paridaichha
Darr Trash Ko Mahol Dekhayar
Goli, Bandukh Tersyaeedaichha
Sansaar Ko Rit Yehi Ho ki,
Sansaar Ko Rit,
Yaha, Sadhai Thulo, Sano Ko Khel BhaiRahancha
Daya, Maya ko aajkal Khaderi Pardaichha GaChha.
Kahi Gola, Bandukh Ko Barsa Ta,
Kahi Goal GOAL Ko barsha
Nepali yasai Dabidaichha, Usai Pilsidaichha

Khoi Ke Bhannu, Ke Binti Bisau,
Ritto Mero Mann, chhaina kehi
Baru,
Sunaunus Sunchhu,
Ma Aashabaad Ko Bhakta,
Bhakti-Bhakti Ma,
Ajhai Bachna Dinus Kehi Barsa
Yehi Mero Binti Mera Maanav Mitra Haru Lai,
Yehi Anurodh Mera Maanav Mitra Haru lai...


Very good one dear brother. Thanks for your participants.

Der se aaye aur durust aaye.. wink.gif wink.gif Keep it up, do post more and more poems.
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#17 Naaz

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Posted 13 October 2003 - 05:58 AM

QUOTE (ShahiPranita @ Oct 12 2003, 05:08 PM)
Na Ta Premi Na Ta Saathi Nai..!

Na ta premi na ta saathi ko lagi
Samaya rokidaina yaha kasaiko lagi!

Mann lai afno na sajau sajilai gari
Socha pani kehi afno dui pal ko lagi!

Har kohi premi khoji rahechha yaha
Afno ammali eklo jeevan ko lagi!

Samay ko raftar sangai bagi rahe
Tyahi nai chha uttam manav ko lagi!



wow, what a wonderful words! I love your words Pranita ji, u r the great, keep it up...keep it up.
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#18 GouchanReema

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Posted 15 October 2003 - 01:39 PM


QUOTE (Sujita Lamichhane @ Sep 3 2003, 01:44 PM)

Asha Badi Kaviharuma, Chakra Balayar, Reema Gouchan, Vipasha Chhetri, pani katai vyastata mai harayeka jasta chhan.



Arule bhanya jhai, lekhika ta ma pakkai hoina tara timile lekhna badhya garai dieu Sujita.

Anyway no problem. Trying hai ta..... wink.gif

Mera Ghazal lai tippani garchhan merai Shayari le
Jodiyeka chhau kina yasari ghanghor andhyaro le!

Chahanthe ma dherai nai ki u sang kura garau,
Yasari hidi diyo aparichit sanga ki ma ke garu?

Maile dekheko muhan samma aayee sakeko thiyo khushi bhannu,
Ali pani taal milauna sakenan yi mera paila le!

Kasaile prashna gareka bhaye taba maile uttar dinu,
Hoina bhane bahira sang kun bhasha ma kura garnu?

Harek sabdaharu ma swarth heridine garchha usle,
He Bhagawan! kehi kripa gari deu kati hasnu aanshu le?


Mathiko Ghazal ma pratek thauma 'complain' jhalkine bhayekole Ghazal ko naam nai 'Tippani' rakhidiye pani hunchha. biggrin.gif Maile actual name ke rakhne bhanera sochna nai sakina.

#19 prachi

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Posted 15 October 2003 - 04:11 PM


Diju Reema, it was superb Ghazal by you. You said you are not a writer (Lekhika) but seems to me, you are a very good Ghazalkar.

A Ghazal by me again,

Dinchha Hawa le raibar malai kaile kaile

Dinchha Hawa le raibar malai kaile kaile
Linchhau mero naam timi kaile kaile!

Umangalai mero timi le khub sangsaar gareu,
Garnechhau samjhana afnai sharaarat kunai sanjh kaile kaile!

Khela Mutu haru sang tara rakha dhyan ma yati,
Hunchha parinam na ramro tyas le kaile kaile!

Duniya ko bhid ma praya harai dinchhau hami,
Anjaan jhai lagna thalchhan muhar lakhaun kaile kaile!

Dinchha Hawa le raibar malai kaile kaile
Linchhau mero naam timi kaile kaile!

Edited by ShahiPranita, 15 October 2003 - 04:14 PM.


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#20 sujita

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Posted 16 October 2003 - 01:19 PM

QUOTE (GouchanReema @ Oct 15 2003, 01:39 PM)

Arule bhanya jhai, lekhika ta ma pakkai hoina tara timile lekhna badhya garai dieu Sujita.

Anyway no problem. Trying hai ta..... wink.gif

Mera Ghazal lai tippani garchhan merai Shayari le
Jodiyeka chhau kina yasari ghanghor andhyaro le!

Chahanthe ma dherai nai ki u sang kura garau,
Yasari hidi diyo aparichit sanga ki ma ke garu?

Maile dekheko muhan samma aayee sakeko thiyo khushi bhannu,
Ali pani taal milauna sakenan yi mera paila le!

Kasaile prashna gareka bhaye taba maile uttar dinu,
Hoina bhane bahira sang kun bhasha ma kura garnu?

Harek sabdaharu ma swarth heridine garchha usle,
He Bhagawan! kehi kripa gari deu kati hasnu aanshu le?


Mathiko Ghazal ma pratek thauma 'complain' jhalkine bhayekole Ghazal ko naam nai 'Tippani' rakhidiye pani hunchha. biggrin.gif Maile actual name ke rakhne bhanera sochna nai sakina.


Dear Reema,

Aayichhau, tyahi nai dherai ho hamro lagi. Auna lai dhilo gareu dear tara Ghajal bhane asadhyei ramro liyera aayichhau. It was really wondefrul Ghajal dear and thanks for your Ghajal. From now, hoping to read your Ghajals, Poems, OR Muktaks on regular basis.

Once again, Thanks Reema.
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