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#1 Mohan Bikram Thapa

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Posted 15 November 2007 - 06:09 PM

आँखाको भाखा नबुझ्नेलाई ओठ खोलेर बुझाउन सकिनँ
बुझेर पनि नबुझेझैं गर्दा छाती चिरेर देखाउन सकिनँ

थाहा थियो मलाई म उनका लागि केवल खेलौना बनिरहेछु
रमाएँ त्यसैमा नखेलाउ भनी उनलाई कहिल्यै सम्झाउन सकिनँ

एउटै यात्रामा निक्लिएका हामी उनी शिखरमा पुगेर हेर्दा
थाहा छैन म कहाँ हराएँ आफैले आफैलाई भेटाउन सकिनँ

न त सक्छु दिन उनलाई दोष न कहीं भेटछु आफ्नो गल्ती
कहाँनेर के बिग्रियो कुरा कसैले सोध्दा बताउन सकिनँ

आँखाको भाखा नबुझ्नेलाई ओठ खोलेर बुझाउन सकिनँ
बुझेर पनि नबुझेझैं गर्दा छाती चिरेर देखाउन सकिन
Naya Bichar from Naya Patrika
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#2 narayan_th

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Posted 28 February 2008 - 05:20 PM

WOW WO WKya daami lekhnu bhayeko chha hajur le
Please keep it up hai aaune din haru ma pani
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#3 chamatkaribaba

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Posted 28 February 2008 - 05:41 PM

Mthapa Ji, Where r u man? We need some more Gazals. It is wonderful.
Theft!
Theft!
And Theft!
No one is safe anywhere,
Thieves are rampant everywhere
Light is stolen,
Dreams are stolen,
Faith is stolen,
Mud is stolen,
Love is stolen,
Life and death are stolen
Alas! What can you expect from others,
When God himself is a thief?
In "Indra Jatra" by Dinesh Adhikary, Sajha Prakashan, 2051 B.S

#4 E major

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Posted 29 February 2008 - 05:14 AM

damn, this is good. Satisifaction reading, I got after such a long time.
Keep pouring your feeling man.
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#5 kamal

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Posted 11 April 2008 - 01:43 AM

Simply the best. Keep it up !!!
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#6 Rajesh Kr. Pathak

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Posted 16 April 2008 - 06:00 AM

Great ....Great......Wonderful
Come withmore such gazals
WAITING FOR MORE..




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