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#1 mild melody

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Posted 31 July 2005 - 09:47 AM

This is a story of an old soldier.......
and i am speaking his words here.
the soldier says:
"this is my last request.....from me to her......
this is my last request.....before i will hold my breath for ever....
this is my last request.....to my beloved....."





One Last Request


As I lay there on the ground, gasping for breath, I soon came to realize that these would be my last moments. Everything around me was spinning and as I hungrily took in air, the pain in my chest was slowly disappearing.

I felt numb to the pain. People were rushing towards me. As I blinked, each moment seemed to slow down before my eyes. I was locked in a world of my own. It was as though no one could see me or hear me. I closed my eyes and took a deep breath. When I reopened my eyes, my vision was still blurred but I was watching the world as how it really was.

The pain was back. I managed enough strength of lift my head up to view the damage done to my body. I'd been shot thrice and the more I thought abut it, the more I could feel the cold metal bullets penetrated inside me. An ambulance drove up and men and women jumped out. They hauled me onto a stretcher and I made no notion to disallow them.

I was fine at the idea of death. I'd lived a long and healthy life. There was only one thing left for me to do now. I extended my right arm and whispered 'Quyen'. She was at my side within moments of my call, her eyes brimming with tears. I smiled at my beautiful Quyen and asked her, 'Will you marry me?'


Love Never Ends.....


#2 shuva-kamana

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Posted 31 July 2005 - 10:35 AM

QUOTE(mild melody @ Jul 31 2005, 09:47 AM)
Love Never Ends.....

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Perhaps,

#3 ashis

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Posted 31 July 2005 - 11:23 AM

To be contined....................????+ blink.gif
Wichtig ist was der Man tun,nicht wie er Aussieht...

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Posted 31 July 2005 - 01:40 PM

such a lovely short story by mild melody,
but this one can't have a second part i think, can it?

mild, i hope to read more and more from you, keep it going

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Posted 31 July 2005 - 02:37 PM

Perfect!

if Love never ends............why do you people change your gf? Why the husbands are still attracted to other ladies? When you are wounded by the attack of tragedy, isn't that an end of a love? And you are in search of another, if not so then you're a pakka kaliyug ko romieo......
May be your love could be at equilibrium state to all reactants and that's why Love never ends....but that love is for the next one, what happend of that previous LOVE??
Thought is free.

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Posted 31 July 2005 - 05:09 PM

Enjoyed the Articles but Second Part??
Wichtig ist was der Man tun,nicht wie er Aussieht...

#7 mild melody

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Posted 01 August 2005 - 08:13 AM

QUOTE(dusk @ Jul 31 2005, 07:40 AM)
such a lovely short story by mild melody,
but this one can't have a second part i think, can it?

mild, i hope to read more and more from you, keep it going

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it won't have a second part dusk.



#8 mild melody

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Posted 01 August 2005 - 08:27 AM

QUOTE(newapasa @ Jul 31 2005, 08:37 AM)
Perfect!

if Love never ends............why do you people change your gf? Why the husbands are still attracted to other ladies? When you are wounded by the attack of tragedy, isn't that an end of a love? And you are in search of another, if not so then you're a pakka kaliyug ko romieo......
May be your love could be at equilibrium state to all reactants and that's why Love never ends....but that love is for the next one, what happend of that previous LOVE??

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newapasa, here i think we deviate to some extent in the way we think.
There is a great differrence between love and attraction, both compliment eachother though.
Being wounded by sorrowful tragedy may not mean the end of love....that is only the end of a relation, in my view.



#9 mild melody

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Posted 01 August 2005 - 08:33 AM

QUOTE(ashis @ Jul 31 2005, 11:09 AM)
Enjoyed the Articles but Second Part??

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ashis...the story is over there. smile.gif




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